My sentences made the book hard to read, and my telling of the story made it dull. I hated making the admission, but after a year and a half on my project, it read like a book report.
But I did take something positive away from it. The Denver Nights manuscript did contain a pretty compelling story.
Unfortunately, it was like the manuscript I had was a level removed from the real one.
And I knew I could tell it better.
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